Essay
If I had the ability to read other people's minds

For many centuries, people always wanted to have special skills and super abilities. For example, to have an ability to fly, to be breathe under the water, to be super strong, to read other people’s minds and many other different skills. So it is interesting to think what my life would be if I could read someone’s mind.
To begin with, my life would be completely different from the life I have now. Of course, I would use this ability to know what this or that person thinks about me. Therefore, I would probably understand how fake the person is, because, unfortunately, there are a lot of hypocrisy among people nowadays. That is why sometimes I need the telepathy so much in my life. Secondly, I would definitely use this ability not only for myself but also for the other people. For instance, I would like to help the police in some crimes. I think this skill would facilitate the work of law enforcement agencies in catching malefactors, drug dealers and other bad people.
However, the telepathy has a bad side. Other people’s minds may hurt you but you could not do anything with that. It would not be possible always to tell people not to think about you in that way, for example.
To sum up, I would like to say that it is really useful but at the same time awful ability to read someone’s minds. It would interesting to use this ability for a couple of days but no more because it could probably ruin or life.



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  1. Natalia Eydelman9 апреля 2019 г. в 17:59

    Hello Nastya,

    The topic you have chosen to write about is rather interesting and has always been one that people keep discussing. From your work it is clear what your attitude to it is.

    However, your work can be improved from the point of view of its organisation: paragraph 3 should be further developed and another paragraph or even two should be added to consider more sides of the matter.

    Content: 4.5
    Organisation: 4
    Language & Mechanics: 5

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